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I wrote "I love you"
in the sand at the beach.
The tide swallowed the words
and drowned them
before I could speak.
I'M FINALLY WRITING AGAIN

*SOBS HYSTERICALLY WITH JOY*

Ahem.

I love feedback, my dearies. Drop me a comment, please? :heart:

Edit: YOOOOO FRONT PAGE?!?! HAPPY EASTER INDEED YOU GUYS ROCK I SWEAR I DON'T DESERVE YOU :heart: THANK YOU SO MUCH FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART MY LOVELIES

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DianaLopes Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Clap  i love it
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littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks! I'm glad! :huggle:
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DianaLopes Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
^^
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puddlethecat Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So lovely and simple in the best way :D
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you very much! :squee:
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:iconpuddlethecat:
puddlethecat Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome :D (Big Grin) 
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MaryBalderrama Featured By Owner May 20, 2014   General Artist
I love this!
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Student Writer
I'm glad. :)
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Professional General Artist
:iconaparazita-r::iconsquirrelflight-77:Your artwork has been graciously featured in Titans Genuine Literature feature ,stay wonderful!Hug:iconsquirrelflight-77::iconaparazita-r:
fav.me/d7if01o
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Writer
Aw, thank you very much! :hug:
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DarkestEbony101 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
In a few words, you have described a lot of powerful emotions. The beauty is in it's simplicity. Way to keep it simple, I'm impressed! Thanks for sharing!
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Student Writer
Aww, thank you so much! :heart: I appreciate it!
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DarkestEbony101 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
You are so welcome! 
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13ZexyDragons Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student General Artist
This is the truthfulness of love, heartbreak, and my life. 
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Writer
Aww, thank you! Sorry about the "my life" part. :(
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Omarius99 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This is very simple but the weight that the words carry is rather immense. Good work. 
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! 
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Omarius99 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
You are welcome. 
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Ringtail101 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Writer
This poem has such a deep meaning to it.  It's short, yet the meaning is powerful.  I like it!  Great work!
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you very much! :huggle:
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:iconringtail101:
Ringtail101 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Writer
anytime :D
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Kiora13 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
nice poem^^
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! :squee:
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:iconkiora13:
Kiora13 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you are evah so welcome^^
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Cevelr Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow this is beautiful~~~
23 words. I'm at a loss for words right now.
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much! ;u;
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:iconloonymoon101:
loonymoon101 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
that was very beautiful...i enjoyed it
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! I'm glad you did! 
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loonymoon101 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014
^________^
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False-Like-Tv Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
Short and sweet like a midget that eats lots of sugar.
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Student Writer
Oh my gosh, this comment made me laugh so hard! :lol: Thanks, dude!
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DJKittehKat Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
Well said XD
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Namida713 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
-writes comment in the sa- -WOOOOOOOOOSH-

; n ; sand is just not a good place to leave confessions and other important things
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littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Student Writer
:lol: Haha, nice. 

I agree, it's a little too loose to hold anything safely. 
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TheWanderingShadow7 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
I very much appreciate the brevity. Very strong for such few words.
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you very much! 

I like your icon, by the way. c:
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Equestrian-Equine Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student General Artist
This is so pretty! ...Almost reminds me of the Little Mermaid....
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littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Student Writer
Ooh, thanks! A few other commenters mentioned the Little Mermaid, but I never realized that this poem sounds like that until recently. :blushes: Cool coincidence! :)
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punx-chan89 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Simple words but so Very beautiful :love:
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littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Student Writer
Aw, thank you very much! :tighthug:
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punx-chan89 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :) :hug:
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frogeyedape Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Saw this on Twitter (I finally got an account) and had to come take a looksee. Beautiful, and very poignant!  I feel like too often we mean to say things or do things, but before we can act on our intentions time (or flimsy memory) wipe the slate clean again.
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littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much! I agree, I think people wait too long before doing things and the moment passes or they lose touch with what they really wanted. 

Also, would you happen to know where you found this on twitter? Because I never posted it there. ^^;
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frogeyedape Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)

Ack! That's no good (except that it led me to your poem).  Umm...yes, I found it again.  User Alidin jaya ‏@alidinjayaST  wrote "lost my voice.: I'M FINALLY WRITING AGAIN*SOBS HYSTERICALLY WITH JOY*Ahem.I love feedback, my dear... http://bit.ly/QpqLNZ  #DeviantART ".  If I recall correctly, I found it because I was scrolling through the #deviantart page.  Also if you search on twitter "little blue raccoon" it's the first thing that pops up.
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littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Writer
Ohhhhh, okay! As long as it's sourced, it's all good! Thanks for letting me know! :hug:
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frogeyedape Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sure thing :)
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alymh Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it! It's sooo beautiful <3
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littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you very much! :D
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Swiftyv Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh my gosh. all of your poems speak to me in a way that describes situations perfectly.
Keep at it :)
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Student Writer
Aw, thank you! As a writer that makes me feel good about what I do. I will! :hug:
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