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When I was six years old,
I decided I wanted to
eat the moon.

Mom with her pink frayed bathrobe
and tired eyes
told me to go to sleep,
that I had school in the morning.

Dad with his stacks of books
and prickly beard
told me that it was impossible,
the moon was too distant.

Well, guess what?
I ate the fuckin moon.
And it was delicious.

Bitches can't tell me shit,
I'll eat the fuckin moon if I want to.
i think there is a deep message here that we all could learn from :lol:

I'm sorry

don't mind me, i'm just being a sarcastic lil shit
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:iconcianatime:
Cianatime Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist
Best
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Student Writer
;)
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LadySmilePuppet Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014
THIS WAS THE MOST DEEP THING I'VE EVER READ
GONNA PRINT IT AND GLUE IT EVERYWHERE
THANK YOU VERY MUCH
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Student Writer
:lmao: OMG THANK YOU GOOD LUCK
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redstar-okumura Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Professional Writer
Lol XD
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Student Writer
:rofl:
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warriorcats303 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I wanted to eat the moon too. I thought it looked like moon-milk-cheese, a word I used to describe tasteless but milky. And yeah, that was my childhood. Actually I still want to eat the moon.
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Student Writer
Go for it man, go eat the fuckin moon if you want to B)
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:iconfadedworlds:
fadedworlds Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Student Writer
oh my god this poem alone made me watch you 
dude
ily this is amazing <3
it's deep as shit
Derp Face 
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Student Writer
Lmao I'm glad! Hahaha thank you! :rofl:
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MapleDashStar Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This is seriously the greatest thing I've ever read in my life.
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Student Writer
:O

OH MY GOSH

THANK YOU:heart:
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MapleDashStar Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome! ^^
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:iconopenskyline:
openskyline Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I NEVER THOUGHT A POEM WOULD MAKE ME SUDDENLY LAUGH OUT LOUD IN THE NIGHT WHEN I  PRETENDING TO BE ASLEEP
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Student Writer
LOL WHOOPSIES
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CatWithATopHat Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
no the meaning of like but the meaning of life.......
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CatWithATopHat Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It started so mysterious, I was like hhhhhmmmm where is this going? Is it about personal glory and achievement and that you never forgot the occasion and used it as a motto to drive you through hard times? 
And then I was like, that poem. that on poem. has taught me the meaning of like.
I love it!!!!!!! XD :D 
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Writer
:lmao::lmao: haha, plot twist! thank you, I'm glad you do!
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DoTheDinosaur24 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha:) I thought this was gonna be something about childhood dreams...LOL it was better!:)
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Writer
Whoops, my sarcasm took me over there for a moment ^^; thank you!
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AnjyBanjy Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Please don't be sorry. THIS IS GLORIOUS. XD
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Writer
:lol: Eeeek, thanks!
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:iconwaraiigoe:
waraiigoe Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This poem is so fucking deep.
xD
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student Writer
:rofl: Thanks!
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LinaLestrangeArt Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Unexpected end. :)  Today Argentina lost in the final of the World Cup :sad:  and you poem made ​​me smile.  Llama Emoji-01 (Laughing) [V1] 
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openskyline Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I was crushed about Agrentina too. ;P
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LinaLestrangeArt Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh! Really Sad 
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! Aw, I'm sorry about Argentina losing. At least the team made it pretty far, right? :heart:
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LinaLestrangeArt Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Yes, the team made it pretty far!Nod 
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jennifibber Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You made me giggle. xD I can honestly say I wasn't quite expecting the ending there.
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Student Writer
:giggle: I got ya!
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Shortypaint-pencil Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:#1: LOL
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Writer
:giggle:
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13ZexyDragons Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Follow your dreams, maybe? Hahah!
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Writer
Hell yeah, eat the moon if you want to! :D
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YukiNettles Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student General Artist
well then
that escalated quickly
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Writer
:nod: haha
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anobrain Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
thank you so much for writing this. :giggle:
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Writer
:lol: my pleasure, thanks for reading 
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The-Jelly-Princess Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student Writer
this is hilarious but also gorgeous :lmao:
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Writer
aw, you really mean that? thank you! :rofl:
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hahahaha oh my I laughed so hard at this! >.<
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Writer
:rofl: hehe
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jazewel Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student General Artist
hmm... that is different. I love it!
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! :D
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PsychologicalAnalogy Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
That illuminating light at night comes from the delicious cheese in the sky :3
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Writer
so beautiful, so tasty. lol
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Aulyssae12 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student General Artist
It was going all deep and then- BAM! Massive twist ending. Best poem ever.
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Writer
Bahahaha, got ya! :lmao: Thank you so much, you're too kind~
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x-Sinister-Chaos-x Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student
Agreed. It makes you try and picture a six-year-old saying it, too!
I'd only say switch the last two verses, because the "I'll eat the fuckin moon" following "I ate the fuckin moon" breaks up the flow with the switch between tenses - how can you decide, in the last verse, to eat the moon when you just did it in the verse before?
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