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schizophrenia. by littleblueraccoon schizophrenia. by littleblueraccoon
"I heard echoes far less lonely than my mind,
but I'd heard you burst into flame.
Listening was always possible,
and usually, I could pretend it didn't exist."

Yay, another found poem! I tried to do a more creative design, but personally I think it looks a bit confusing. ^^; Also, it's sort of crooked and the quality is just...blech. My scanner is not so great. I got my idea for found poetry from other deviants, and the book is Beauty by Robin McKinley. 

 2013 littleblueraccoon
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:iconspiderwebwisher:
SpiderwebWisher Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I just began reading that book, and I remember passing this page! :D Wonderful work! 
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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:iconspiderwebwisher:
SpiderwebWisher Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D Hi-fives for the same icon! *high-five*
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Student Writer
:highfive:

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SpiderwebWisher Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
highfive 
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BiscuitoSauce Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
The fact that it's sort of confusing to read sort of adds to what it's about. I don't know if you have it or not, but I think everybody who has it can safely say that it can be confusing and scary, which this shows a lot.




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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Student Writer
I've heard that a lot, actually, and that's comforting to me because I wasn't 100% sure how readable it was going to be. ^^; To hear that it adds to the piece means a lot. I don't have schizophrenia personally, but it's a subject that I'm interested in. I read up on it a little before working on this. 

Thank you very much! :heart:
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dragongirlhellfire Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013   Traditional Artist
I agree it looks a bit confusing, but I thought that worked with the theme, and I found it easy enough to follow the path around. :)
Very nice!
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :hug:
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BlackGoddess13 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
It took me a while to figure out the pattern, but once I did I saw it immediately. This is very clever.
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student Writer
That's a relief. ^^; Thank you!
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ArturoIlhuitemoc Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
I actually like the fact that it is confusing. It perfectly fits the theme.
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student Writer
I guess it works, then! Thank you!
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LordLJCornellPhotos Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm liking this very much. This is a very good thing to play with I would think. Me next :hug:
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer
:nod: Give it a try. It's fun! Thank you! c:
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KeyFrost Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I did this yesterday, I think, and the art obviously isn't as flashy or decorative, but I think I've found a good poem. Thank you for inspiring me to do this.
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer
Cool! Did you post it on dA (if so, can you send a link my way, please?)? Thank you for reading! (:
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:iconkeyfrost:
KeyFrost Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I did, indeed. frostedlyre.deviantart.com/art…
I think I'll keep doing this if I get some good feedback on it. c:
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student Writer
Ooh, I like it. Very simplistic, but effective. 
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:iconkeyfrost:
KeyFrost Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, madam. I'll try to do more.
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JinxSixx Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
this is just bad ass Cx I love it!
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer
:iconcoolguyshadesplz: Why, thank you! 
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:iconjinxsixx:
JinxSixx Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome :D 
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:iconkmrst:
kmrst Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Emoji Set: Applause This is great!:iconlittleblueraccoon: you never disappoint. Also I didn't have a problem following the poem (once I found the start)
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer
:bow: Thank you! That's good to know; sometimes these can be tricky.
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:iconkmrst:
kmrst Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Np. I know how tricky these can be...
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MidnightMusik14 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
oh my god, i am so going to attempt to do this.  
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer
Go for it! It's very entertaining, especially if you're bored or stuck somewhere and need something to do.
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Poetic-Kitsune Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
omg i knew that was Beauty before i even click the descript dfjkasf i love that book and know it like by heart, ahaha...

anyway this looks radical and sounds lovely as a poem, well done. c;
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
It's an awesome book, isn't it? (:

Thank you very much!
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Lostkavi Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
As one familiar with schizophrenic tendencies, this makes perfect sense.

To a sane person, maybe not so much
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
I've never known anyone with schizophrenia, but I read up on it and this page in the book reminded me of it a little bit. I find the human brain to be intriguing.

Thanks for commenting! (:
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forbravery Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
I really love the poem, it's hard to see where everything connects in the image though.
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
I know...^^; I need to work on planning these better. Thank you!
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
love this to bits. :rose:
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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solis-ortus Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
you're welcome :D
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IntrovertRabbit Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:hug:
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littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
:huggle:
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The-Jelly-Princess Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
I love found poetry! I would really like to try some myself, but it seems rather difficult O_o

I actually love the design. It kind of ties in with the title, you know?
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you; I see what you mean! Found poetry is very fun. I'd definitely recommend trying it. It doesn't need to be perfect on the first go. :heart:
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Desidum Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
I agree with The-Jelly-Princess, when I first clicked on it I thought the design was deliberate. It works well. c:
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
Oh, thank you! (:
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Desidum Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
You're welcome c:
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Mniricecakes Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i don't know, i almost thought the point was that it was confusing, and hard to follow. adds to the atmosphere, adds to the theme.
i really like it
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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Mniricecakes Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :)

(also your icon is mesmerising. cute little kitty :aww:)
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks! ~Imouto-Thi made it!
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ExpressKeeluh Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely job as always, my dear. :heart:
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:iconlittleblueraccoon:
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :blushes:
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