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you are smoke,
blackened feathers,
and I forget
how the mockingbird
used to sing.

please,
I forget
how to miss someone.
you left warm spots in me,
familiar dents and puckers
now empty.

nothing holds my eyes in place.
they roll from one end of my skull
to the other,
rattling.
I don't want to see
a world without you in it.

you let this place hollow out
and dry like infinite droughts.
you
let me
burn.

the years age me,
and I don't know who I am
anymore.

I only remember you,

but I forget that you are gone.
"And I wish that I was as good as you,
caring and trusting.
And I wish that my condition was new,
but I'm old and rusting."


-Brand New, You Stole, Daisy

this is heavily inspired by that song. kind of like how you get so used to breathing you kind of forget that you do it 24/7. does that make sense? if you stop breathing there are obviously consequences. suddenly there's this weird absence that you never experienced before and you don't know how to keep moving.

2014 littleblueraccoon

in other words, mine!
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alkaline-earth-11 Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Student Writer
It's crazy that I had the very lines you used in the description stuck in my head today, and here deviantART is recommending this poem to me while I hardly ever get on here anymore. I love the poem, too. The imagery your simple words evoke is truly disturbing and at the same time comforting in that it is so familiar. Keep on writing such beautiful things. The world sure could use it.
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littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Writer
Hey, weird coincidence! :O_o: Aw, thank you so much for your kind words. It's nice to meet another Brand New fan. :heart:
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Mocchia Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Here let me add this to my favorites
Lovely, and captures the emotions well <3
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littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :hug:
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Mocchia Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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Kitoria Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
When I read this poem, I thought of how when a person I loved died, it hurt and I felt like a piece of my soul died. It is painful when you lose something important to you isn't it?
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littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Writer
Aw, I'm so sorry. :( It definitely is. 
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xJillValentinex Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I saw this on the homepage. I read the first stanza and was hooked. Very well done!
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littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :huggle:
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xJillValentinex Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem :) Keep up the nice work!
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